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From: Astragoth

To: Soel
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135071.15 in reply to 135071.1
Date: 3/19/2010 10:35:36 AM
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The coach off xxxxx has seen enough and calls a timeout...

if you are playing badly this is a good sentence. but i have seen this being used as a TO too when it is a 2 point game and the team that is behind calls this tactics for tactical reasons. wouldnt make sense at all in such a case...

Last edited by Astragoth at 3/19/2010 10:35:54 AM

From: Elmacca

To: Soel
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135071.16 in reply to 135071.15
Date: 3/19/2010 11:14:07 AM
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Yeah, maybe "The coach of xxxx decides it's time to talk it over and calls a timeout" would work in both scenarios.

From: Soel

To: Soel
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135071.17 in reply to 135071.8
Date: 3/19/2010 3:05:07 PM
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I need to change "tries to power his way to the hoop" to "powers his way to the hoop" for continuity reasons. Keep the bugs/suggestions coming!

From: Soel

To: Soel
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135071.18 in reply to 135071.17
Date: 3/19/2010 3:06:33 PM
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"gives him no room to breathe" is getting annoying too, I'll change it to "guarding him closely" or something.

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135071.19 in reply to 135071.18
Date: 3/20/2010 6:21:20 AM
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Just tuned into my match and noticed some nice refreshing phrases... all good in my book so far, keep up the good work!

Thought I'd just add some typo's as Im not skilled sufficiently to alter the phrases in their entirety!

I think you are aiming for Arches rather than arces (this is one of the inside shot phrases)

Last edited by Superfly Guy at 3/20/2010 6:28:31 AM

From: Soel
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135071.21 in reply to 135071.11
Date: 3/25/2010 2:44:27 PM
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Engine text updated, please keep offering up your suggestions!

From: Elmacca

To: Soel
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135071.23 in reply to 135071.22
Date: 3/31/2010 4:48:02 AM
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Soel,

There are a few lines needing tidying up a bit before any file is sent to Charles. Pls can you BBmail me to discuss.
Thnx,
Elmacca.

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135071.24 in reply to 135071.23
Date: 3/31/2010 5:44:10 AM
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Can you add a line for what happens after a dunk is scored... Player X beats his chest wildly / flips the bird at the opposing coach...etc :D

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135071.25 in reply to 135071.24
Date: 3/31/2010 8:14:17 AM
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mind adding a line when shome blockes...

like:

playe x goes up for the shot ater player y send him a great pass.
but was blocked/got rejected by player Z or something like that?

btw, great work on the lines so far.

Rev

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