I am a former radio guy myself, just do not translste well to the visual medium. That being said if your gonna make a real run at being a YouTuber the production values must improve.The modulation is much too hot and hollow, and stop talking thru your nose Ernest T. and the lighting much too dissonant.
As I suggested on another related thread, when it comes to the musak you gotta come strong. Old school NFL/KPM stock music is in this producers mind is the way to go, search for material on Dave Volskys channel and you can't go wrong.